Hi classmates! Today I will talk about my ideal future life. I expect in five years I will finish my carreer (Anthropology) and I 'll be doing a magister of social anthropology in genre in europe (maybe france or spain , i'm not sure yet) and i will be thinking of making a PhD in something related with genre too( or I hope that). In relation with my personal life I hope , at that time, not be dependent of my father (at least in the economically aspect), so I wish to be independent as soon as I can , because I hate borrow money to my parents and I like earn my own money.
In the other hand I don't think I will be married yet. I also hope to be living outside the country for have more experience and conect me with more people who are interest in the same studying areas like me.
Well I thing that's all for now.
See you at next class!
In the other hand I don't think I will be married yet. I also hope to be living outside the country for have more experience and conect me with more people who are interest in the same studying areas like me.
Well I thing that's all for now.
See you at next class!
Hey, I think you should say future instead of futur.
ResponderEliminarThanks for your comments, see you!
Alejandra,
ResponderEliminarI hope all your projects and dreams come true soon.
You have shown some improvement in this post, for example when you say things like: I will talk about / I expect in five years I will finish / I'm not sure yet /
thinking of ...ing/ I wish to be independent as soon as I can / I don't think I will be married yet / I also hope to be living. Very good!
Remember:
(a) We say: ‘like/love/hate/have/need + something. Ex. I like pizza, We love coke, They need new experiences.
But we say: ‘like to/ love to/hate to/have to / need to’ + verbs. Ex. I like to run, She loves to chat, Do you have to go now?
(b) We say: ‘the same as’ and ‘different from’
(c We say: a book about/on /related to (something) , a course on/about / related to (something), etc.
Ex. An article about gender / an article on gender , a lecture related to religion religion / a lecture on religion.
Here’s the corrected post:
Hi classmates! Today I will talk about my ideal future life. I expect in five years I will finish my carreer (Anthropology) and I 'll be doing a magister ON Social Anthropology ON GENDER in europe (maybe France or Spain , I'm not sure yet) and i will be thinking of TAKing a PhD in something related with GENDER, too( or I hope that). In relation with my personal life I hope , at that time, I AM NOT dependent ON my father (at least in the economical(/) aspect/ECONOMICALLY SPEAKING), so I wish to be independent as soon as I can , because I hate borrowING money FROM my parents and I like TO earn my own money.
ON the other hand I don't think I will be married yet. I also hope to be living outside the country SO AS TO / IN ORDER TO have more experience and GET IN TOUCH with more people who are interestED in the same study(/) areas AS me.
Well I thinK that's all for now.
See you next class!