Hi classmates! Well I think my favorite piece of tech is the computer, but not notebooks because i think it's too hard to write numbers with their tiny keyboard. So I prefer stationary computers.
I got my computer in, if my memory doesn't fail me , 2003 , my father gave me one because like he says "it's a powerfull instrument to make research" ( in this time , in programs like encarta , "the machine to make homework", salvat encyclopedia) and is a very good instrument to write school homework and now university papers.
I use it every day to listen to and download music, be at day time with university, class, friends and family news with programs like messenger, gmail ( for exchange information or send works to other people) and skype. I love skype because you can talk with someone who is far ( in my case my family who are in Osorno) and see them , but more important for free.
I think my life without a computer would be very similar , maybe it could be better because i would spend less time sitting in front of the computer and i would have more time to talk with my brother , because in one sense , when you have a computer you are tranformed into a sort of slave of it because you have to be outstanding it all the time.
On the whole your post is OK, but some parts are not clear enough, for example what you wrote in the first two parentheses. The third paragraph needs a lot of editing. Could you do something about it? Please check the corrections I’ve made .
ResponderEliminarHi classmates! Well I think my favorite piece of tech is the computer, but not notebooks because i think it's TOO hard to write numbers WITH THEIR tiny keyboardS. So I prefer stationary computerS.
I got my computer IN, if my memory DOESN’T FAIL me , 2003 , my father GAVE me one because, like he sayS "it's a powerfull instrument to make research" ( in this time , in programs like encarta , "the machine to make homework", salvat encyclopedia) and is a very good instrument to write school homework and now university papers.
I use it every day to listen TO and download music, be it at day TIME with university, class, friends and family news with programs like messenger, gmail ( for exchange information or send works to other people) and skype. I love skype because you can talk with someone who is far ( in my case my family who are in Osorno) and see them , but more important for free.
I think my life without A computer would be very similar , maybe it could be better because I WOULD SPEND LESS TIME SITTING in front OF the computer and I WOULD have more time to talk with my brother , because in one senSe , when you have a computer you ARE tranformED INTO a sort of slave of it because you have to (????)be always outstanding it.(???)
Compare: I got / bought / sold my computer in 2003 / last year / a week ago
I’ve had this computer since 2003 / for six years
IF MY MEMORY SERVES ME RIGHT / SERVES ME CORRECTLY / DOESN’T FAIL ME / DOESN’T BETRAY ME
The most important thing is that it …